tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post261091763810600554..comments2023-10-12T08:21:27.253-07:00Comments on Gerry Boyd's Poetry: Nausea at Moon-rise, Re-Birth at Dawngerry boydhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-49243456060852423472010-03-18T05:50:56.223-07:002010-03-18T05:50:56.223-07:00@Dianne: Thanks and welcome. Ok to get lost right?...@Dianne: Thanks and welcome. Ok to get lost right? Sometimes I lose myself.gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-1592613478199310302010-03-17T19:42:19.538-07:002010-03-17T19:42:19.538-07:00I love the last stanza, some of your lines I get a...I love the last stanza, some of your lines I get all lost, but then you reel it back in.<br />Thank you for your writing and sending it out here.<br />Thank you for reading my work.Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-22884331471750054862010-03-07T05:59:42.000-08:002010-03-07T05:59:42.000-08:00@Harlequin: Thanks Harlequin. I do gothic once in ...@Harlequin: Thanks Harlequin. I do gothic once in a awhile. It's not like my publisher minds! Stick it to the man. Ha!<br /><br />@Limpidus: Welcome. If there was wrunging to be done, I suppose I'm glad to have done the wringing. Appreciate the read and glad something wrung true. ;-)gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-20701451832579242482010-03-07T05:52:44.225-08:002010-03-07T05:52:44.225-08:00odd aspic medallions of even hearts
Whether it wa...odd aspic medallions of even hearts<br /><br />Whether it was the ruby ink or emerald glass<br />we could not tell in the pre-dawn light,<br />trading the silver breath of tomorrow<br />for the baffling tongue of acid now.<br /><br />and so many more images that just wrung my heart of admiration. This might as well be the best of the dark poems I've read recently.<br /><br />Thankyou for dropping by on my space. :)<br />Great poem, Gerry.Socially Awkward Paint Monsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11904787559528194980noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-87785654115579176002010-03-05T21:44:46.052-08:002010-03-05T21:44:46.052-08:00die, in that place before dawn
&
bleeding got...die, in that place before dawn<br />& <br />bleeding gothic red<br />I was so taken with these phrases, so taken. <br /><br />beautiful in word and feel<br />thanks for this.Harlequinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04964772119118368322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-31905206582292010362010-03-05T07:54:07.066-08:002010-03-05T07:54:07.066-08:00@Sandra (if): When the words move or move you, tha...@Sandra (if): When the words move or move you, that is good. Muchas Gracias.gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-37346486248482966772010-03-04T14:45:10.451-08:002010-03-04T14:45:10.451-08:00as I read this ...it was as if I was dancing or ru...as I read this ...it was as if I was dancing or running behind your words.....very nice ..Sandra.ifhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-78582271555589946242010-03-04T04:08:48.469-08:002010-03-04T04:08:48.469-08:00@Dimps: Welcome and thanks for stopping by. Regard...@Dimps: Welcome and thanks for stopping by. Regards.<br /><br />@OE(I): Accept the assessment of grandiloquence. I go there sometimes despite my best attempts. Welcome and thanks.gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-79180521910008971242010-03-04T03:36:12.655-08:002010-03-04T03:36:12.655-08:00Here there be poetry!
A mite grandiloquent at tim...Here there be poetry!<br /><br />A mite grandiloquent at times, but no more than what the recipe called for. Shade upon shade of rich, hypnagogic ephemera.<br /><br />Much enjoyed.Obsidian Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06913606373142918131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-68016669022125526152010-03-03T22:37:54.754-08:002010-03-03T22:37:54.754-08:00Hello Gerry,
wait a minute,
wait a minute,
wait a...Hello Gerry,<br /><br />wait a minute,<br />wait a minute,<br />wait a minute-<br />the sun's about to rise<br /><br />Simply wow!! Wonderful creation... What a sketch... I could draw the entire picture with these words!<br /><br />Loved the verbiage!<br />Regards,<br />DimpleDimplehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04616482931140406425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-87775422977511363562010-03-03T13:10:40.612-08:002010-03-03T13:10:40.612-08:00@Johnsie Noel: What a lovely comment. That truly m...@Johnsie Noel: What a lovely comment. That truly means a lot. Thanks.gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-79959199268371886422010-03-03T13:00:07.029-08:002010-03-03T13:00:07.029-08:00If colors had a scent I feel like you have made me...If colors had a scent I feel like you have made me smell them...Jenn Bowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06641483659758406883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-68352354820516541572010-03-03T10:59:53.324-08:002010-03-03T10:59:53.324-08:00@WIAW: Je suis creepy beaucoup. What can I say? I ...@WIAW: Je suis creepy beaucoup. What can I say? I even creep out myself. xogerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-42442393089504906902010-03-03T07:37:29.795-08:002010-03-03T07:37:29.795-08:00Gerry Boyd
on creepy toes
in cahoots
in the shado...Gerry Boyd <br />on creepy toes<br />in cahoots<br />in the shadows.<br /><br />And with this,<br />"I am speechless and yet I speak,<br />guileless and yet I beguile,<br />thoughtless and yet I think:<br />man, that is really boring-"<br />I HA!<br />and then with this,<br />"one of the many days I often die,<br />in that place before the dawn."<br />you do in fact, simmer me down.<br /><br />xo<br />erinWoman in a Windowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747858840088922077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-85874692723321217732010-03-02T05:49:26.958-08:002010-03-02T05:49:26.958-08:00@Vesper: Welcome aboard the crazy train. Glad to h...@Vesper: Welcome aboard the crazy train. Glad to have you along. Cheers.gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-85728442559956309482010-03-02T05:30:41.967-08:002010-03-02T05:30:41.967-08:00Surreal indeed... You have an amazing, exceptional...Surreal indeed... You have an amazing, exceptional imagery here, Gerry; I'd have to quote almost every line to mark the ones that appealed most to me. I love it!Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-48040447433179613942010-03-02T01:14:01.628-08:002010-03-02T01:14:01.628-08:00@Noxalio: Glad this took you for a ride. An inexpe...@Noxalio: Glad this took you for a ride. An inexpensive holiday indeed.<br /><br />@Mr.Manson: Cheers mate.<br /><br />@Nevine: If only you knew what's inside of my head! Thanks for letting me know I was able to transcribe some of it effectively. Surreal, yes, but I wouldn't have it any other way. Thanks.gerry boydhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08404762839765626232noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-40943687563883939102010-03-01T14:29:59.957-08:002010-03-01T14:29:59.957-08:00Gerry, I don't know if I've told you this ...Gerry, I don't know if I've told you this before, but whenever I read one of your pieces, I feel like I've entered a surrealist work of art. You use amazing words and create amazing images... so effortlessly, it seems. And this...<br /><br />I am speechless and yet I speak,<br />guileless and yet I beguile,<br />thoughtless and yet I think:<br /><br />... I loved!<br /><br />NevineNevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-24850165956156795412010-03-01T05:59:28.921-08:002010-03-01T05:59:28.921-08:00loved this journey friend, very high imagery, love...loved this journey friend, very high imagery, loved the poem from start to end :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3178437599315653605.post-48592344742105625452010-02-28T23:21:57.548-08:002010-02-28T23:21:57.548-08:00a grand journey
indeed;
there are so many intere...a grand journey <br />indeed;<br /><br />there are so many interesting<br />twists<br /><br />and<br />turns here,<br />such as:<br /><br />"we were feeling that fear that distracts from fear" <br /><br />and<br />"The pin-prick mantissa of the visible kiss"<br /><br /><br />love the title,<br />the conversational nature,<br /><br />and the final three<br />stanzas<br /><br />a lot.<br /><br />ver nice!Noxaliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05918592255605681638noreply@blogger.com