twelve tenacious yellow leaves left behind by an autumn late
were otherwise quivering on a stark and twisted spray near
the bleached ropes of hammock that grasped my inner name:
I waited for your windy release in the leafless valley chilled,
so early anxious that my burning weep was spilled into diamonds
and scattered in hopscotch gratitude upon the concrete way.
Sunday, December 6, 2009
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ah, the last leaves left over from fall...
ReplyDeletenice poem jerry
this reminds me of monty phyton. and the leaves screeeeaming as they fall one by one to the ground...
ReplyDeleteGood and abstract even absurd... I love it...
ReplyDelete"I waited for your windy release in the leafless valley chilled,
ReplyDeleteso early anxious that my burning weep was spilled into diamonds"
Masterful and gorgeous.
I am liking this style of yours.
So cool to post and see comments. I find it fascinating how readers interpret. This was, from my point of view, the least comical and absurd thing I have written and, yet, I sense success most when multiple interpretations are received.
ReplyDeleteI can add that the images are wonderful... and the interesting metamorphoses.... tears to diamonds... I can almost feel the cold coming in ...
ReplyDeleteWow. I like it Gerry.
ReplyDeletePeace.
very nice.......I can imagine that!
ReplyDeletethanks if.
ReplyDeleteFor some reason all i can think of after reading this is Lot's wife was turned into a pillar pf salt.
ReplyDeleteDid her tears become diamonds as they fell to the ground.
Hmmm
It's simply beautiful.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Branwen, welcome.
ReplyDeletefabulous.
ReplyDeletei love it.
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