Motel shroud sheet thrown
down cheap on shore sleep,
the grave sea grass now weeps
a shrift white on shorn gown.
Wait a minute.
And in a minute rise to wait
the footboard is overgrown
to an iridescent blue marsh,
a tricolored heron posed so
blue becomes transparent,
is rapt through lifted sheet
because there's no one there
to cough the fluff cotton down
or downy shades poised now.
Perhaps inside a halo will burst-
no it's kept elsewhere where.
And there's none but a dream of
hurricane rustpaneled amphitheater
importing beauty to salty marshes.
One man lives in a bowl.
others on shorebird stilts.
Pastels for the common folk,
stone for the stone bishop lift,
a dumb wait for a stony heart.
Romance on the third floor
but you're not lead to see
the green patina or scarlet glass,
just a boulevard of sparkplug stores
and a statue for tall revolting heros:
the seawall has never loft enough
to stem the brown surge will.
Sunday, January 30, 2011
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thank you for sharing this,
ReplyDeleteI just love it.
Tall revolting heroes! Awesome. Galveston Island feels like both spain and newfoundland in this poem; makes me want to see the place. Thanks, Gerry.
ReplyDeletePeter
*Like*
ReplyDeleteWow, Gerry, that's a tough one to read out loud! Tonguetwisters in the first stanza.
ReplyDelete@Liza Ursu: Thanks. Great name. I could only think 'Liza Bear'. I suspect you've heard that before.
ReplyDelete@Old 333: For me there was a weird vibe there. Ergo this poem which resisted all attempts to be a sonnet. It was and then it wasn't and then it was and then it wasn't. Repeatedly. Ha!
@Francis: Thanks. Not sure if I 'like' this. More like I had to get it out of my system.
@Gordon Mason: The result of many, many revisions, but it's sort of my gut re: Galveston.
"no one there to cough the fluff cotton down"
ReplyDeleteI love that. It hit me like a movie with narrative. Dreams. Elusive and potent. Last night I said "f*ck" over and over in a dream. I don't remember it, but I was told. And now I wonder.
@WandW: No of us quite get the mystery of dreams, do we? Merrily, merrily, merrily...ha!
ReplyDeleteGerry,
ReplyDeleteAlmost biblical in tone. Perhaps more than fitting for a quiet uninterrupted Sunday evening read.
So good to have found your words this evening.
All Good wishes with your onward voyage!
Eileen :)
@Eileen: Biblical, eh? Interesting. Cheers and thanks for the read.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the word play in this and the repetition of words used in different ways
ReplyDelete@Chris: Thanks for the read Chris.
ReplyDeleteSo much of my neck of the woods is boulevards of sparkplug stores. I really like "motel shroud sheet".
ReplyDelete@Tess: :-).
ReplyDeleteGreat description...:)) Wanna definitely visit this island..! ;) My favorite:
ReplyDelete'Pastels for the common folk,
stone for the stone bishop lift,
a dumb wait for a stony heart.'
Keep blogging..:))
@Fiducia: Thanks for the read. I'm producing as fast as I can. Which isn't that fast really. Ha!
ReplyDeleteGerry, I wish you'd put one of those silly +1 buttons on your blog. I'd rather push buttons here than there, for some reason. Steak and fettucine, that's my plan. I bet that all rhymes in some universe with different physical laws...
ReplyDelete@old 333:need to research that. anything to make your appreciation easier. ha!
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