a grasshopper slept still in the grass today
unnoticed most by heard sheep munching.
if you were looking for green uneven chrome yellow
the camouflage would at last astound unseen for
even tipped toes though blades crisscross might
have through quiet snoring caught a downy ear.
Friday, September 30, 2011
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is typo a lilt? or maybe no....
ReplyDeletelovely poem -
A very quiet morning, then...*smiles*
ReplyDelete@old: lily was typo. but i decided to remove them both. ha!
ReplyDeleteJinksy: cheers!
the gods must be at play
ReplyDeletea grasshopper
landed on my leg today
outside
sitting in the sun
a good day
to realize 'living'
:) beautiful writing Gerry
I've missed you! x
@Izzy: Thanks hon. I admit I've been a slug. Promise to stop by soon.
ReplyDeleteHere'a a revision. I wrote this last night and hated it this morning. The typos were the least of the problems.
ReplyDeletetypos or not, lovely work with word and image.
ReplyDelete@Harlequin: not sure which version you read, but cheers, as always. ;-0
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