Monday, September 12, 2011

when the shadow ghost is splay

dancing in the dark is its own sweet frolic
even when partly lit by market lights.

apples and onions are close by degree
but do not draw the opposites we see

on a white canvas that dances mundane
where nothing at all by daylight shows
unless you count a steely gear of sweat
that counts for a blue dream fit to a day-

at end of the dancing begins at dusk
and, almost scarlet, lasts the all night

whole.

the alien fingers beckon leafy
but are seem to leave at dawn.

4 comments:

  1. the alien fingers beckon leafy
    but are seem to leave at dawn


    great ending, Gerry.

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  2. @Akeith: Cheers mate. And thanks for continuing to read this drivel. HA!

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  3. in this poem and the one before i was delighted by the way you used the couplets.... they felt like sweet little surprises.

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  4. @Harlequin: Yes, sometimes they surprise me too!

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