cherry red scales of coloratura scent drift lightly
white across gleaming uplifted patinas of sound
and rhythm cannot exit so quickly across deer
skin stretched taut against pale December skies
of cirrus and crystal ice that brush near heaven
with vertebrae scales frozen stiff sky high in azure
canvases chiaroscuro field and ground blanched
to spin a colorless globe with blue focus glowing
on iconic foothills whose spiny bones revel under
the leafless supplication of grey trees that reach
for a god that is half-moon hidden behind fictions
that arise from bored parchment dried to reaching
so far too far when the sun arcs low at dawn
Saturday, December 3, 2011
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Your poetry sings Gerald!...and the words dance perfectly together...I do like the last lines echoing to the title...
ReplyDelete@Danielle: Poetry should be about creating music with words so I value your comment quite a bit. Merci Beaucoup.
ReplyDeletelovely piece. i especially liked " half moon hidden behind fiction" ; very nice.
ReplyDeletei am also happy to be catching up on reading your past few posts. i have been quite ill and away from my blogging delights for a few weeks....
so nice to see your usual lyrical and imagery-quixotic work....
@Harlequin: you not well :-( but thanks for rising to read. take of yourself please.
ReplyDeletei've read most of your poetry posts. i think this is my favorite.
ReplyDelete@gardenia Girl: thx hon. i always like my last one best too. then i forget about it and move on. ha!
ReplyDeletesharp words.
ReplyDeletewell pruned poetry.
wonderful....sometimes, short verse works wonders too.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletethx. i mostly only write short verse.
ReplyDeleteDecember sky is tough,
ReplyDeletebrave way of facing the music.
cheery blossom makes me smile.
ReplyDeletecool write.
detective eyes.
ReplyDeletenice song.
ReplyDeletethe world is a mixed and complicated place,
ReplyDeleteglad to see a glance of that in your eyes.
happy rally.
very interesting word bending...
ReplyDeleteexcellent.
ReplyDeletewell done.
ReplyDeletebeautiful blinking imagery.
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