i. the fair weather that grew into a silky redemption
our gate into the moss that day
was trilled in a perfect coloratura,
demising at will the bark target
that was grilled by rusty willows-
pink but secretly unmentioned:
the munificent weeping of impatiens
in a necessary press towards bloom
as to my blush became the saintly dew.
you might call it paradise,
I call it something more.
ii. every evolution has a modicum of unfortunate offshoots
then came a calligraphy shorn of boredom that never faded:
our foundry unspoiled and grave where carved tablets lounged
in a soothing sienna mud that reeked of bubbling, spiky abuse.
I was so high I could see the planets.
iii. it only sounds like growling when I mean it.
there was something barking a gray language of granite oppression,
a voice that dragged with sisal ropes across the canine floor
and tore into the seductive sway of elms and oaks and maples:
it had the darkening violence of an unexpected autumn storm-
I had only expected leaves.
iv. the circle is sometimes announced by the chimes of innocence
twigs were hurled until our nostrils reeked of blood-
times were so much different when the sun arced low
and a horrified pack of shills went monkey, totally:
for a split dream moment the falcon aspired
under gray flurries that huddled with the Valkyries-
to wait for the freeze is, often, to be frozen still:
I still yearn for that sky-blue pop.
Friday, November 20, 2009
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i loved iv. too quickly reality sets in nowadays...
ReplyDeleteIt reads like a work of art. And the waiting game... agonizing. The line that spoke: "to wait for the freeze is, often, to be frozen still:". I heard its voice in the silent freeze.
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Gerry, if it were only the title I would love it still but it is given so much more significance juxtaposed with the grey granite language.
ReplyDeleteThis one, I enjoyed, very much.
xo
erin