Friday, February 12, 2010

an almost innocent haiku

saplings bow to sky
oven mark now passing nine
salt and peaches pie

12 comments:

  1. It might not be completely guilt-free, but it's still quite tasty.

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  2. almost/amlost....
    in the innocence of flavor

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  3. Nice. what a paradox from language, adding Almost to inocent actually transform it s semantics to not innocent at all, almost reverses the meaning, instead of aproaching it.

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  4. very nice Gerry, good Haiku its amazing how 3 lines can impact, certianly did here :)

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  5. A sense of where 'majesty' and the 'mundane' meet...

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  6. "Almost" is right. Innocent haiku are rarely this delicious.

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  7. quite proper indeed. :) lovely my friend. xo

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