An echo of loud blossoms blasts white insistent chimes
and lost Westminster resounds in a pink memory of time
ticked down grey granite walks where clocks neatly wound
call back rainy centered smells of a paradise moistly found.
Tented under the peppermint boil one can easily fear the cure
that some say scalds but those voices raised in steam cry rain
and the time I almost found you missing came but near assured
over a mist of Avalon condensed that neatly kissed the drain.
Sunday, March 25, 2012
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Neat and tidy rhymes, sensory engagement and a well-constructed metaphor all make this quite an enjoyable piece. Cheers!
ReplyDeletenice work on the rhyme scheme and ( your usual wonderful)images... i liked the reference to the mists of Avalon....
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