Friday, September 9, 2011

more to follow

While a funny little rain lyrically blows
with lovely drips on hydrangea rows


and scattered endlessly across avenues
is our quickly duck with an umbrella blue.

4 comments:

  1. This is a thoroughly charming piece, nothing more need be said.

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  2. Gerry,

    So it does rain with you too (at times).....

    I thought it was mainly on the plain!

    Best Regards, Eileen

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  3. @JZ: I'm charmed you were charmed. Cheers.

    @Eileen: Ha! We've had a LOT of rain here on the East Coast this year. Hurricanes and everything.

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  4. Ha, I couldn't resist the title, so count me as one "more to follow" you!

    Thanks Gerry for following over at my place I am humbled that a man of your words has tagged on. I've spent an hour or more going through your output and am blown away by the tightly danced wordings.

    Your profile states "somewhere" in the US. I'm familiar with that "somewhere". You gave it a name in two of your Astral Nomads posts and you've written about the "Brunswick Lines". I spent my childhood 10 miles from that "somewhere".

    Peace.

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